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Review: The Time Traveler’s Guide to Medieval England

July 30, 2018October 16, 2018Leave a comment

The Time Traveler's Guide to Medieval England: A Handbook for Visitors to the Fourteenth Century by Ian Mortimer My rating: 5 of 5 stars “If we really want to understand what humanity is, and how adaptable we are, we must see ourselves as a constantly living, evolving race—always on the very cusp of a vast … Continue reading Review: The Time Traveler’s Guide to Medieval England

Review: The Writer’s Tale – The Final Chapter

July 16, 2018October 16, 2018

Doctor Who: The Writer's Tale: The Final Chapter by Russell T. Davies My rating: 5 of 5 stars "I only write to find out about myself, and I'll only achieve that if I'm honest." I'd always admired Davies. I was a big Doctor Who fan; while I enjoyed Moffit's tenure as show-runner, Davies will always … Continue reading Review: The Writer’s Tale – The Final Chapter

Review: Usagi Yojimbo vol 4

June 7, 2018October 16, 20181 Comment

Usagi Yojimbo Saga Volume 4 by Stan Sakai My rating: 5 of 5 stars Stan Sakai: the most consistently excellent writer and illustrator currently in comics. Usagi Yojimbo is--for all the fight scenes, all the black-and-white blood, all the battles--a very quiet comic. It's about Miyamoto Usagi, a wandering ronin who travels the warrior's path … Continue reading Review: Usagi Yojimbo vol 4

Review: The Shadow of the Wind

April 3, 2018October 16, 2018Leave a comment

Note: a client recommended this, and I no longer remember who. If you are that client, THANK YOU! The Shadow of the Wind by Carlos Ruiz Zafón My rating: 4 of 5 stars “A story is a letter that the author writes to himself, to tell himself things that he would be unable to discover … Continue reading Review: The Shadow of the Wind

Review: Blood, Water, Paint

March 14, 2018October 16, 2018Leave a comment

Blood Water Paint by Joy McCullough My rating: 4 of 5 stars The story of Artemisia Gentileschi happened a long time ago. Sadly, it could have happened today, and it probably did. Artemisia lives in her father's house, and she paints. She paints for her father, who's a talentless hack, and his name is signed … Continue reading Review: Blood, Water, Paint

Review: Strange the Dreamer

February 16, 2018October 16, 2018Leave a comment

Strange the Dreamer by Laini Taylor My rating: 5 of 5 stars This is one of the best books I've ever read. No, really. I read professionally, and I struggled to think of a catchy one liner to sum this up, and the first and last thing I could think of was "this is one … Continue reading Review: Strange the Dreamer

Review: The Master and Margarita

February 10, 2018October 16, 2018Leave a comment

The Master and Margarita by Mikhail Bulgakov My rating: 5 of 5 stars This story is absolutely buck-wild. Woland (the devil) and his retinue arrive in athiest Moscow to wreak havoc on the city in general and the literary community in particular. To be clear, I haven't read any critical analysis of this story, so … Continue reading Review: The Master and Margarita

Review: The Designer

October 19, 2017October 16, 2018Leave a comment

The Designer by Marius Gabriel My rating: 4 of 5 stars "The Designer" is a complex narrative--it's not quite about Christian Dior, nor is it quite about post-occupation Paris. It isn't quite a romance, nor is it quite a war story. Rather, it is all of these things, as seen through the eyes of the … Continue reading Review: The Designer

Review: The Language of Flowers

October 9, 2017October 16, 2018Leave a comment

The Language of Flowers by Vanessa Diffenbaugh "The language of flowers is nonnegotiable, Victoria." I loved this book so. Damn. Much. At a basic level it's about a girl named Victoria and what she does with her life once she washes out of the foster care system. On a more thematic level, it's about damaged … Continue reading Review: The Language of Flowers

Review: Wuthering Heights

September 25, 2017October 16, 2018Leave a comment

Wuthering Heights by Emily Brontë My rating: 3 of 5 stars Well...I finished. This is a good story--an excellent story, actually, given that I didn't want to put it down, and it inspired an almost compulsive need to know what would happen next. Better folks than I have written a lot more about this book, … Continue reading Review: Wuthering Heights

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Shannon Roberts

Developmental editor with over fifteen years' experience in SFF, surreal fiction, and literary fiction.

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“Shannon is an amazing editor with great insights about how to improve novels. I would never work with anyone else. In my experience, she’s several levels above other editors. You can’t go wrong in hiring her!”

― Brian T.

“Working with Shannon has been a dream come true. The manuscript critique she did on my novel was truly a game changer. I was extremely nervous about sharing this manuscript with an editor because I wasn’t sure if it was “good enough” but Shannon was amazing, professional and incredibly thorough. Her overview, edit suggestions, and … Continue reading Hannah K.

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“I’ve worked with Shannon for something like eight years now. That alone should tell you how I feel about her editing. I could write a very long and detailed review, but in the spirit of clear and concise writing, I’ll just say this: Shannon knows her craft, and always does her best to make me … Continue reading John P.

― John P.

“Working with Shannon was a wonderful experience. She addressed plot and character issues as well as provided tips to cleaner writing. She was professional and tackled the job with an enthusiasm that shows that she really immerses herself into the story. Her margin notes and report were well organized and insightful, and on issues of … Continue reading Scott P.

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